Nice melody but needs mastering
The idea for the melody is great - somehow uplifting and happy :)
but in my oppinion: the detuned synth doesn't fit to the background, dude. And you need to adjust the volume levels of all tracks. adding a limiter to the mastertrack is minimum here. in the 3 third of the song you are doing a great job in alternating the detuned synth but it's simply too loud. fix that and it will be a fine piece.
greetings